Rondelet – the heart holds court

The heart holds court

through days and nights of loving:

the heart holds court,

for children’s hopes and fears,

as mothered mind waits silent,

stands guard throughout the years:

the heart holds court

http://dversepoets.com/2013/06/13/form-for-all-the-rondelet/#respond

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About rosross

Editor, writer, poet.
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10 Responses to Rondelet – the heart holds court

  1. Tony Maude says:

    Not quite a traditional rondelet, but then I did invite people to break the form … smiles
    The refrain here is really strong; it opens up a huge number of possibilities and has resulted in a memorable poem, Ros.

  2. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    Oh, very nicely said!

  3. Marya says:

    Very well done — something haunting about it.

  4. brian miller says:

    hmmm i think it all comes down to how you read it….the purpose of the guard really….to keep safe or contain….nicely done to form ros

  5. Terrific, loved reading this, not an easy form to manage, well done here, thanks, Kevin

  6. Mary says:

    A mother’s heart is ever watchful, I think. I take the message as a positive one.

  7. claudia says:

    this brought a lion mom to my mind..watching.. caring but then letting them play as well and find their own way.. mine have that age that they slowly take flight..a good thing..smiles

  8. nessa1313 says:

    Your refrain is really strong and memorable.

  9. viv blake says:

    Excellent and heart-warming!

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