Hollow

Your voice rang hollow

with the words,

that you had packed

for me, in neat and tidy

circumstance they mocked

all I had been.

And yet they offered

insight into the man you were,

and opened to reality;

sincerity deferred.

If I had not been brave enough,

to fall into their depths,

I never would have known

the truth, or found self-confidence.

Within the echoed callousness,

of those brief, thoughtless words,

the truth took me in hand

and led me through the door.

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HOLLOW (adjective)

1

: having an indentation or inward curve : concave, sunken

2

: having a cavity within

3

: lacking in real value, sincerity, or substance : false,meaningless

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About rosross

Editor, writer, poet.
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